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Post by Lex on Feb 23, 2007 17:54:47 GMT -5
Light of the world actually.
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Post by Lady Mage on Feb 24, 2007 9:27:46 GMT -5
Okay, that makes sense.
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Post by Lex on Feb 24, 2007 15:45:19 GMT -5
Hehe, I hope so  |
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Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 13, 2007 15:30:28 GMT -5
How beautifully sad. Wonderful metaphors + strong emotions = fantastic poem.
Favorite line:
My shy smile weakened,
Dulled by her aversion,
Her eyes saw only the floor.
Excellent job!
~Song <3
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Post by Lex on Mar 13, 2007 17:18:09 GMT -5
Thanks Story... *is that what we call you? Seriously...?*
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Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 13, 2007 17:23:57 GMT -5
Actually, my name is Song, which is what I prefer to be known as. And *duh* this was great!  |
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Post by Lex on Mar 14, 2007 3:13:09 GMT -5
Ok, Song, apologies.
You'll notice my hypocritical winges about self-esteem across the forums!
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