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Statues
Mar 7, 2007 14:59:27 GMT -5
Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 7, 2007 14:59:27 GMT -5
Not only was this beautifully written, but I must say that the word choice worked very nicely. It was smooth, with no phrase out of place. It was a very touching poem, and has left a very pleasant "aftershock" on me.
Favorite line:
Struggled with all force Used every ounce of vigor Felt every muscle drained From a war that seemed forever
Keep up the great writing!
~Song <3
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