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Post by Lady Idril on Jul 24, 2006 22:36:00 GMT -5
Don’t Go Away (Keep It Real)Put your guns down, love, Let’s keep it real. This war you’re waging doesn’t look good. Tie a yellow ribbon round your head and call it done. Hey, love, sha la la. Let’s keep it cool. Remember the smell of innocence. Go back to your city and live it all again. Let’s keep going, love, Let’s keep it soft. Take a walk down memory lane Back to the beginning and the birth of peace. Go on, kneel, love, Let’s keep it right. Speak the words to the Father above, The words I shout for you every night. Come on, love, stay with me, Let’s keep it real. Hold off on killing, let’s hold on to peace. A flower in my hair, a smile on my face. Yeah, if I can’t make you stay, I’ll keep it real while you’re away.
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Post by Meluivan Indil on Jul 26, 2006 13:23:28 GMT -5
Ah, if only life could be like what this person is trying to accomplish. Not just for one person, but for us all.
Imagine that world. Peace.
Sorry being philosophical here.
Loved it, hon.
M.
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Post by Anime Monster on Jul 26, 2006 17:37:20 GMT -5
Wonderful, Idril, really wonderful.
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Post by Lady Idril on Jul 26, 2006 21:17:21 GMT -5
Thank you both very much! I wrote it on a whim. I haven't been feeling entirely patriotic lately, so I just gave it a shot, and that's what came out. Thank you!
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Post by Ravendust on Jul 29, 2006 1:02:24 GMT -5
loved it! Great job
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Post by Lady Idril on Jul 29, 2006 17:09:44 GMT -5
Thank you so much, Raven!! *hugs*
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paintedmusic
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I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't I would die. -- Isaac Asimov
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Post by paintedmusic on Jan 7, 2008 22:54:08 GMT -5
"Remember the smell of innocence." That was my favorite line. It was just so... poetic for lack of a better word. Beautiful poem; you're a great writer! (So jealous!)
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