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Post by Lex on Feb 27, 2007 2:40:38 GMT -5
Doubtful My work isn't that good, and you have experience and writing to show it.
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Post by Anime Monster on Feb 27, 2007 11:21:09 GMT -5
Ah, thank you, but you truly have excellent imagery in this.
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Post by Lex on Feb 27, 2007 12:27:40 GMT -5
Yours is far more refined I assure you, my poetry is too vague in its subjects.
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Post by Noire on Feb 28, 2007 11:43:44 GMT -5
Legislatum- Yes, you may be vague in your subjects, but vague is sometimes good. I really enjoyed this poem- it was subtle, yet beautiful- descriptive, yet vague enough to whet your taste. You've done a truly excellent job. Like I said earlier, the contest this year is going to be interesting. Love, Noire
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Post by Lex on Mar 2, 2007 3:07:26 GMT -5
Thank you Allianoire.
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Post by Dreamer on Mar 26, 2007 5:16:52 GMT -5
Legislatum- Yes, you may be vague in your subjects, but vague is sometimes good. I really enjoyed this poem- it was subtle, yet beautiful- descriptive, yet vague enough to whet your taste. You've done a truly excellent job. Like I said earlier, the contest this year is going to be interesting. Love, Noire I could NOT have said that better!!! Good job, Ed! (maybe I shouldn't call you that?) ~Anna Christie~
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Post by Lex on Mar 26, 2007 16:27:17 GMT -5
Amusingly it is not as interesting as we hoped... it is just really close.
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