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Post by iarejedi on Feb 24, 2007 19:53:19 GMT -5
Please don't let the title of this poem scare you. It's really not like so much. This poem was inspired from watching to much Loveless anime and from my own weird relationship to a guy at the moment.
Masochism
By: Iarejedi
Love me, love me, love me Your eyes scream for it I want nothing but to give it I want to prove my love for you Pain proves the bond The more I love the more I hurt Your pain calls to my love Your wounded soul pulls at me I want to break it completely I want to put the pieces back together So that every fracture is sealed with me In return, would you break me–remake me I want to be all yours and you all mine Can I make your every prayer come true I want to feel and taste the power of you Ripping apart my soul tearing through my heart Rip me, shred me, hurt me I’m yours to destroy I’m yours to love If love is pain and pain is love the more it hurts, the more I love Is it wrong, is it wrong All I want is every part of you Love me, love me, love me I beg you, my eyes are screaming for it
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Post by LadyRiona on Feb 24, 2007 20:30:56 GMT -5
I've read this a few times off your LJ and when you sent it to me, and I still really like it. There, my opinion for you.
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Post by Lady Mage on Feb 25, 2007 9:10:54 GMT -5
Very nice jedi! I really like it- the description is excellent.
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Post by Lex on Feb 26, 2007 2:57:16 GMT -5
Impressive piece, very mind engaging.
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Post by Anime Monster on Feb 26, 2007 21:43:27 GMT -5
*hugs Bob* beautiful piece and so sad. *more hugs*
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Post by Noire on Feb 28, 2007 11:41:34 GMT -5
Bob- (is that your name? or do you go by Jedi?) You've done an excellent job on this piece- the competition is going to be interesting this year You really feel like you are inside the poem. Love, Noire
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Post by iarejedi on Feb 28, 2007 21:55:05 GMT -5
Thank you Noire for your kind words. I'm Bob to my friends which Anime and Riona happen to be. You may call me that. The name is kind of a long story, but fear not I am female. Once again thanks for your review.
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