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Post by Lady Idril on Mar 10, 2007 14:29:42 GMT -5
That's so beautiful and so sad! Your descriptions are really vivid, this is an amazing piece
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Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 10, 2007 16:43:20 GMT -5
Thank you so much! *hugs*
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Post by poeticsoul on Mar 19, 2007 18:51:08 GMT -5
Song!
Hey, It's Kinsey! *(From Nd.com)*!!! I just joined this site, but I came here first!lol I really loved this peice. It was very good!
Kinsey
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Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 19, 2007 18:57:52 GMT -5
Hey, Kenzy! You probably already know, but Anna Christie is on here too!
And I'm glad you liked the poem.
If you need any help searching around, PM me. But you're a smart girl; I doubt you'll need the help.
~Song <3
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Post by poeticsoul on Mar 19, 2007 20:11:34 GMT -5
I did know she was on here! She was the one who game me the link and asked me to join!!! Acctually, I proablably will need some help!lol
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Post by Dreamer on Mar 30, 2007 0:39:22 GMT -5
Song, HOW CAN YOU BE SUCH A GOOD WRITER!!!! ?? Ok, got that out! No, really, this was amazing? No, not strong enough of a word.... How 'bout, breathtaking? Yes, breathtaking is the word. Seriously, I absolutely loved this piece! Keep up the amazingly, wonderful writing!!!!!! P.S. I think I foudn a few spelling errors but you tell me; She was leaned again the back of a brown chair.Shouldn't it be "leaned AGAINST" or am I wrong? Her thoughts that day were once again oh him.And this, shouldn't it be "ON him"? Sorry if I'm wrong about those but I just thought I'd let you know so you could fix 'em! Again, breathtaking. ~Anna Christie
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Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 30, 2007 8:52:38 GMT -5
The problem with spellcheck... 'oh' and 'again' are words, so it doesn't see them as errors. (And I'm a skimmer, so I don't see it myself.) I edited the post. Thanks, Anna Christie. *blush* I'm glad you liked it.
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