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Mar 3, 2007 16:08:27 GMT -5
Post by Ravendust on Mar 3, 2007 16:08:27 GMT -5
^o^ Thanks!!
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Balloon
Mar 16, 2007 7:11:57 GMT -5
Post by Dreamer on Mar 16, 2007 7:11:57 GMT -5
Nice job, Raven! However, if I may say something, I thought it end a bit too abruptly... I was like, "Eek! What did she say?" lol! But very nice, I like it!!! ~Anna Christie~
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Balloon
Mar 18, 2007 12:13:28 GMT -5
Post by Ravendust on Mar 18, 2007 12:13:28 GMT -5
I did that on purpose to keep the readers guessing.
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Balloon
Mar 19, 2007 9:00:38 GMT -5
Post by Dreamer on Mar 19, 2007 9:00:38 GMT -5
Oh, I see! Lol! Well, it worked on me!! P.S. in your signature you wrote "She's strong... and scary........ I bet she's single." That is so weird! lol! One of my friends, (she lives in the Philippines) has the EXACT same quote as her email signature! lol!!) Sorry, I dk why I just said that... Came to me I guess... lol! ~Anna Christie~
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Balloon
Mar 19, 2007 12:05:26 GMT -5
Post by Ravendust on Mar 19, 2007 12:05:26 GMT -5
lol, well, I watched this episode of Naruto, and the phrase just kind of stuck with me. Didn't really expect anyone else to have the same lines... XD
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Balloon
Mar 29, 2007 10:30:15 GMT -5
Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 29, 2007 10:30:15 GMT -5
Aw, that was so sweet! Very nicely written. I adored the yellow balloon metaphor.
The proposal threw the story off a bit for me. It was a nice touch, but I would have prefered more childhood memories compared to the balloon.
Still, it was very enjoyable!
Favorite line: “Do you still want to fly?” My brother asked me shakily. “Of course!” I exclaimed indignantly, “I’ll always want to fly, my balloon went ahead of me, but I’ll catch up!”
~Song <3
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