|
Post by Wyvernwings on Apr 1, 2007 19:57:51 GMT -5
Well it doesn't take me long to write poetry. So I set to work and got a few samples of what I could do with it and I chose which one I liked best. So here it is.
The Storm
Elements kept separate, Are elements of peace, But when they’re mixed together, Destruction they shall reap.
Winds are churning softly, When met with cold will rage, And with the meeting of the earth, The cost will then be paid.
Waters swelling silently. When met with heat will rise, They’ll mix and flow and finally meet, Way high up in the skies.
Wind and water, dirt in clouds, With friction they will meet, And then when tensions running high, The Lightning will release.
On and on the system runs, All in it’s path that lay, Shall find that there is only one, Price that is to pay.
This is typical poetry for me. So here you go.
|
|
|
Post by Lady Idril on Apr 1, 2007 20:16:25 GMT -5
My goodness, I think that's a record for fastest entry posted You're incredibly talented to be able to write poetry so quickly, I'm definitely envious! And this is a gorgeous piece, I love how it flows. Very nicely done!
|
|
|
Post by Dreamer on Apr 2, 2007 7:59:10 GMT -5
Wow!! I think you actually write faster than me! Than was marvelous!!!!! Great job, the picture is portrayed beautifully!!! ~Anna Christie~
|
|
|
Post by Wyvernwings on Apr 2, 2007 13:53:37 GMT -5
Thank you. *Beams*
It honestly doesn't take me wrong to write poetry, but I get really frustrated and ugly while I do it because I need it to be perfect. In all honesty the third stanza of this one is bugging me still, but there was no better way to get it than stress the e on meet and rely on the strong e in release.
And Idril, I actaually waited to post it because when the contest came up I was like "That's great!" and ran off to my corner to be ugly in, and before 10 had two diffrent works. The second one was alot more romance than weather though so I decided to go with this one, then I waited to post it until the first cause I was afraid I'd get introuble for posting it too soon.
|
|
|
Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Apr 2, 2007 17:36:05 GMT -5
OMGosh, that was beautiful! Wow.... *rereads* Excellent job. I adore metaphoric poems.
Favorite line: Elements kept separate, Are elements of peace, But when they’re mixed together, Destruction they shall reap.
~Song <3
|
|
|
Post by Dreamer on Apr 3, 2007 9:00:54 GMT -5
Thank you. *Beams* It honestly doesn't take me wrong to write poetry, but I get really frustrated and ugly while I do it because I need it to be perfect. In all honesty the third stanza of this one is bugging me still, but there was no better way to get it than stress the e on meet and rely on the strong e in release. You're very welcome!!! I know what you mean, about getting frustrated... That's me too! lol! Buit really, and it was just lovely! ~Anna Christie~
|
|
|
Post by Wyvernwings on Apr 3, 2007 14:40:26 GMT -5
Thank you!
|
|