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Post by Lex on Apr 19, 2007 13:27:20 GMT -5
This is for all those lovers of storms, I know I'm one of them. Thundergod Thundergod. Your dark clouds gather, Water splash in the shallow puddle, Leaves crunch beneath my shoes, But I’m distracted, Staring at a maelstrom, A mile above my head. The soft rain patter, Darkness broiling in a grey sky, Raindrops falling all around me, And you’re grumbling, Thundering at the earth, A mile above my head. A light slash shatter, Sky cut in two by dreaded bolt, Flash stays after silent burst, Yet I’m happy, Loving all the chaos, A mile above my head. Thundergod.
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Post by Lady Idril on Apr 19, 2007 18:03:38 GMT -5
Fantastic, as per usual. I like the second section the most, but the whole thing is very, very good. Kudos, Slatu!
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Post by Lex on Apr 20, 2007 1:21:51 GMT -5
Thanks Idril!
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Post by Wyvernwings on Apr 20, 2007 12:22:48 GMT -5
Yes, I think that my favorite is the first section as well. It's lovely Lex.
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Post by Lex on Apr 21, 2007 7:18:09 GMT -5
Thanks, its not a winner, but its better than nothing...
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Post by Wyvernwings on Apr 21, 2007 16:04:47 GMT -5
Have a little confidence Lex!
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Post by Lex on Apr 21, 2007 16:57:17 GMT -5
Oh I am, but competition is stiff!
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