Ting
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Watashi wa baka desu ka. Hai.
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Post by Ting on Jun 5, 2006 22:14:15 GMT -5
Hey guys, I'm writing (or I suppose almost written) a rather lengthly novel-like creature and I would really like it if someone with a good bit of experience had a bit of time on their hands and could look over it. Its a 300 page beast right now and I'd really appreciate anything.
If for my book "A Scream From Within" rated PG-13 for language, blood, and violence.
Thanks,
Ting (aka devilblondie)
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Post by Anime Monster on Jun 5, 2006 23:54:05 GMT -5
I do so if you can send it via e-mail...how large of a file would that be? If you're hoping to get it published, it might be good to have several people read over it. What one person doesn't catch another might.
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Ting
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Watashi wa baka desu ka. Hai.
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Post by Ting on Jun 6, 2006 6:22:47 GMT -5
Hey,
I'll do that. I haven't decided whether or not I want to publish it. I won't ever until I'm happy with it and I'm not happy with it right now (if ever) :S
I'll send you the entire Part I of my story, that's only like 40 pages or so.
Thanks a lot!
Ting
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Post by Meluivan Indil on Jun 6, 2006 10:01:30 GMT -5
Ting, I'd look it over for you too if you'd like. Do you need it beta'd for spelling and grammar mistakes or just someone to give you an opinion? I can do either or both for you if you'd like.
M.
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Post by LadyRiona on Jun 6, 2006 15:06:54 GMT -5
Along with Anime and M, I'd be glad to help. And like M asked, do you need it done for spelling and grammar or opinion? I can do both, but grammar and spelling are my forte.
Anyway! Good luck, hon.
Ri
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Post by Lady Mage on Jun 6, 2006 17:22:06 GMT -5
Hey, ting! Wow, you've got a lot of people here replying. I would be thrilled to look it over as well. As Anime just said, it might be a good idea to get several people to look at it. Just send it to my email. And, like both M, Ri, and now myself have asked, do you want grammar and spelling looked over, or just opinion!
Good luck, and happy writing,
mage
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Ting
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Watashi wa baka desu ka. Hai.
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Post by Ting on Jun 8, 2006 9:40:32 GMT -5
Well, its more or less just an opinion on the plot/depth/dialogue kind of thing, I've got the spelling and grammar down pat myself. I might miss a few things in my editing process, but generally I'm good on that front. So yeah, if you guys would like to read it and give me your opinion, you can just go to: www.fictionpress.com/~devilblondieAnd all that I have written recently is there (I know I know, a different site lol, but at least its not fanfiction.net haha) and the first 4 chapters of it are actually on this site under "original fiction" and "action". If you'd rather me send it to you via email, I can send all of Part I to you (my book is in 4 parts), but when my computer crashed I lost all of Part II, so besides in my handwritten scribblers, that site is the only place that's got it. Thanks guys, I feel so loved! *hugs* Ting
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