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Post by rayman112 on Jun 14, 2007 22:18:08 GMT -5
Like i said earlier i need a beta reader so i started this new thread like you suggested. I'm story is an original fantasy and its about three siblings who get separated in a world unlike earth. the story his called the portrait on the floor (namely because i couldn't think of anything else to call it) and I'm just looking to see if someone can give me some advice on it. I would really appreciate if you could help.  |
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Post by LadyRiona on Jun 14, 2007 22:38:08 GMT -5
Is what you have posted now all you have or do you have more? And I scrolled through it, didn't really read it yet, but I'd suggest you double space between paragraphs so it's a little easier to follow rather than looking like one huge paragraph. If you need to separate different segments of a chapter, then use ~~~ or ---- to do so.
That's all I have to say right now about what I've seen. I'm busy all weekend, but I will try to take a look at it either Sunday afternoon or Monday.
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Post by rayman112 on Jun 14, 2007 23:09:40 GMT -5
thanks. i'll fix it so its easier to read. i didn't mean for the to be that way but i copied and pasted it from another program on to this.
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Post by LadyRiona on Jun 15, 2007 13:05:41 GMT -5
It's okay, but it is a good thing to Preview your post to check the format of it, so keep it in mind.  |
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Post by rayman112 on Jun 15, 2007 15:38:54 GMT -5
ok, i will. when you read it tell me what you think of it. please.
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Post by LadyRiona on Jun 15, 2007 21:42:32 GMT -5
I will, most definitely.
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Post by rayman112 on Jun 21, 2007 18:54:32 GMT -5
would anybody like to beta a new story i'm writing now?  |
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