Beta Needed

[Wyvernwings]

Hehe... Well I've driven away two so I was looking for a third victim. There are two stories I really want read over for grammar. One is finished entirely and I am actually thinking about going through the motions of trying to get it published, and the other is more than half way through and that I love dearly.

They're two very different styles.

The First is "Once Upon a Feather". This story is almost all character interaction. Much more of a teen read, with a girl struggling to keep her family together. This one I need to know the potential of, as well as the grammar.

The Second is "Once Upon a Thorn". This is much more typical of me. It is high adventure and plot, with a deal of character interaction that is used more to advance the plot than the characters. It's written in two points of view in two different times, and it's first few chapters are posted already under Fairy Tales.

Neither of them are quick reads. "Once Upon a Feather" is 45 pages with authors notes. "Once Upon a Thorn" is 72 pages. Both are relatively formated and on Word. I implore you to read a chapter of each before ruling them out on size though.

Thank you.

Wyvernwings

[rayman112]

I'm not perfect when it comes to grammar but I can try reading over one of them.

[Wyvernwings]

Which one would you perfer to read?

[rayman112]

So far I've read Once Upon a feather. I like it a lot.

[Wyvernwings]

Huh... what do you know. I thought I put up Roses, guess I put up Feathers instead.... I'm glad you like it. Do you want me to email the rest to you?

[rayman112]

Yea, I would like to read the rest of it. Did you get the PM I sent you, with all of the revisions in it? You had only a couple of grammar issues that needed to be settled.

[Ravendust]

I could help out some too ^^ I'm not easily deterred and I know your passion... I'm going through the motions of trying to get a few different things published... haven't gotten that far yet though *snickers* Anyway, I'm pretty good when it comes to catching errors and the like. So, I'll leave it up to you.