Lady Phoenix
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Hush
Aug 2, 2006 20:49:34 GMT -5
Post by Lady Phoenix on Aug 2, 2006 20:49:34 GMT -5
Hush, my love
As the new day dawns.
Your whispered words
Makes your parting harder.
No words on Earth
Could describe what you've done.
No one can understand
How you changed my life.
I cannot bare to lose you;
You do not wish to leave.
Unfortunately, 'tis not our choice.
That drunk sealed our fate.
Your breath slows.
Your light fades.
Silently, you leave me;
Softly I cry.
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Hush
Mar 13, 2007 15:15:49 GMT -5
Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 13, 2007 15:15:49 GMT -5
Wow. Strangely, I couldn't breathe while reading with poem. I guess that's what they mean by breath-taking!
Favorite line: Hush, my love As the new day dawns. Your whispered words Makes your parting harder.
Great job.
~Song
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