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Post by Jojo on Sept 17, 2006 15:31:45 GMT -5
I sit here, staring out the window Watching the rain run down All I can think about is one thing And how it hurts me inside
No one knows about it I haven't told them Not a soul But I fear they will know
I show it on my face I show it with my actions They hear it in my voice But I can't stop thinking about it
The day I saw you Was the day you smiled That smile whisked me away To a world I will never know again
Why did you go? Was it my fault? Did I upset you so much That you abandoned me?
So I sit here Staring out the window Watching how the raindrops Fall down the glass
And I'm reminded of you And how you left me When there was no one else To comfort me inside
I blink again Once, twice, three times I'm afraid someone will see The raindrops that fall
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Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 13, 2007 15:22:27 GMT -5
.... Wow.
This is by far your best piece. I could easily picture it, and move with the character entirely. Excellent job. Very beautiful.
Favorite line: No one knows about it I haven't told them Not a soul But I fear they will know
~Song <3
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