Tids-Magi
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Post by Tids-Magi on Nov 13, 2005 13:17:57 GMT -5
I own nothing but the clothes on my back... hehe I always wanted to say that...
Chapter 3 Past Memories
I didn’t know if Alan or Tobe followed me and at this point in time I really didn’t care. I walked out of the gates, Yes I know by the time that I come back they will be closed but I have ways to get back home. I walked down the hill toward the forest nearby keeping track how many steps it took until I came to a big enough clearing. I lowered my hood and walked to the center of the clearing, the sun on my back. I closed my eyes and opened my arms almost like I was going to give someone a hug. I felt the band around my neck twitch. It felt like a ripple that went down the back of my neck twirling around a few times before it moved to the back of my legs down to my knees. The ripple continued until it reached my stomach. I opened my eyes and smiled when I seen my protector and friend Keini. Her wings folded were about the same width as my height. She was about twelve feet high in her full form and the same white color as my eyes. If you were to see her you would automatically know she was a dragon, and an old one at that. She was only twenty years younger then me.
"Tids" Keini said resting her big head into my shoulder and I brought my hands up around her head. Or at least as far as I could which was about her eye. "What too you so long to call wake me?"
'New people here' I replied in my head. 'I've been healing everyone that has been sick since I got here'
"Well who did you heal today and why is it you seem a little mad?" She asked as she lifted her head out of my arms.
'Alan of Pirate's Swoop needed his bones healed'
"Well that answers the Who then tell me the Why little one."
'Watch who you call little I'm older then you Keini.'
"Watch what you say, one I'm bigger then you, two I could leave you here and fly off."
'I know you wouldn’t do that Keini me and you have been though a lot why would you leave?'
"You still haven’t told me the why Tids" Keini said as she laid down on the ground her head rested onto her tail.
'The why is that he took over the cooking when he knows it’s my duty to do the cooking'
"Tids have you not figured things out since the Battle?"
'You mean when I helped shut the Immortals into the divine realms?' I asked. There are many wars that have happened in my time.
"Yes, what other battle would I be talking about?"
'What does this have to do with Alan?' I asked as I laid down in front of Keini's head looking up into one of her eyes.
"Tids, the role of the woman has changed, Females back in our time were not allowed to become Knights, and here they have a Champion that’s a female. You had to hide your gender just to help close the gate."
'I was the main person who closed it Keini'
She glared at me and hit me lightly on the head angrily. "You were not get it though your head. You along with a huge group of others were there and did it together, you just put a seal onto it."
'Again what does this have to do with Alan?'
"I'm trying to teach you that the roles of the women have changed since we were last here."
'But not when it comes to cooking.'
"Tids, who do you think cooks the meals for the Kings Own on the road?" she questioned
'That’s different Keini' I answered twirling a blade of grass in-between my fingers.
"How so Tids? I would like to hear your arguments on this one."
'They have to cook for themselves so they can survive when they are on the road while in a town, village or city its up to the women to cook for the males.'
"At Pirate's Swoop who do you think cooks for them when both Aly and Alanna are not there?"
'Ummm... The barons cook who is most likely female.'
"Alright that’s it I'm done talking to you if you wont listen" Keini said as she stood up lowing her head to touch my neck again. "You are never talk much when you’re angry. Call me-"
"Don’t you dare touch her!" Keini and me turned out heads to see Alan standing with his sword un-stelthed and Tobe standing just a little behind him. Both were looking as if they had seen a ghost.
Yeah! so now (for all you new readers...) you know who Keini is hehehe... I just love her.... anywho... moving on...
It may take a while for me to get the next chapie up cuz I just got "The Will of the Empress" and I'm only like half way though it... give be about err... two more days if sign-language lessons dont get in the way... anywho... keep up the reviews
*gives BeautifulDisaster a cookie* Yeah a new reviewer...
opps...
*gives alanna and magewhisperer two cookies* you two can shoot me for forgeting to give you a cookie... err wait... I just baked them... yeah thats it... hehe
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Tids-Magi
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Post by Tids-Magi on Nov 17, 2005 10:40:24 GMT -5
Welcome to the world of crazy people... population everyone... well just me really... hehe Hope you like this chappie ^.^
Chapter 4 Dreams "Don’t you dare touch her!"
I could feel Keini growl as she warped her tail protectively around my waist. "What business do you have here?"
"I said let go of her!" Alan yelled back taking a step closer toward us.
‘Keini let me go, they will only attack you if you don’t’ I thought placing my hand into her side. She looked at me oddly as she swallowed the fire that was licking the inside of her mouth. ‘And don’t call me Tids here, they know me as Kay and if they heard my real name the would most likely go mental on me.’
I thought placing my hand into her side. She looked at me oddly as she swallowed the fire that was licking the inside of her mouth. ‘ "If they harm one single hair on they head I’ll roast them." Keini said aloud just for the fun of it. I took a glance over to Alan and Tobe. Alan stood all brave like while Tobe looked like a mouse caught in the corner by a cat.
I smiled nodding my head at Keini and walked a few steps away from her as soon as she released her hold on me. But just far enough that she could still get me out of their reach if need be. I looked from Alan to Tobe and back again. What are you two doing here? I signed toward them and of course Tobe translated for me.
"It would be easier if I talk through you then do your strange hand movements" Keini replied from behind me.
‘They probably wont believe you Keini’
"Who are you talking to?" Alan asked Kay.
"She’s talking to me who else?" Keini replied looking at Alan.
"Why would she want to talk to a monster like you?" Tobe said trying to be brave from behind Alan.
Keini and me glared at Tobe and I guess Keini had fire licking her mouth again because both Alan and Tobe jumped back a step.
"Come" Keini said coming to me side as she wrapped her tail around me. "If they cant talk to a being who is more intelligent then them, then I see no sense in staying here."
'But Keini' I said trying to talk her out of leaving.
"No buts you’re coming with me for a bit." And with that she transferred me to her back, right in-between her wing joints and her neck.
"Hey!" Alan called toward us. "Wait a sec-" I didn’t hear the rest because Keini took off into the sky. Now I have to deal with her...
'Keini where are we going?' I asked her only a few minutes later.
"Away from idiotic humans." Keini replied as we descended down toward a bigger clearing then the one we were just in.
'Keini! I'm a human too'
"Yeah," Keini replied landing softly on the ground. "But one, your way older then them, two you are not as dense as them most of the time."
I climbed down from Keini's back landing on the ground with a not too graceful thud. 'May I ask what’s so important about this spot?' I thought as I looked around. At the edge of the clearing there was, what looked to be a little cottage now a pile of rubble. And at the other end was a decaying fence. Why Keini brought me here is a mystery beyond even my understanding
"Think back," Keini, said as she laid down and starred into my eyes when I looked at her.
'Umm.' I am trying really. There were a lot of moments in my life that have taken place in a field or valley's with cottages and fences. 'Is it where we first met?' I questioned taking a shot in the dark on it.
I am trying really. There were a lot of moments in my life that have taken place in a field or valley's with cottages and fences. I questioned taking a shot in the dark on it. "Your close" Was the reply that I got from Keini.
'Where the shaman's and I closed the immortals in?'
"Tids, we meet the day the day the other immortals were shut away, I was even there when it happened remember? You need to think out side the box"
I looked once again at my surroundings; nothing stuck my mind as being familiar. 'Well the only place that was close to where we met, and where I helped shut the immortals, was my farmland.'
"And bingo was his Name O." Keini replied with a huge sly grin on her face, or as big as a dragon can have.
'A little ahead your time frame there Keini?' I asked lying down beside her with my head on her side.
"Hey your the one who likes to look at events that are going to happen way, way into the future its not my fault I seen the rimes that the children liked." She replied shrugging.
'Well, back to the matter at hand, Why would you bring me here?'
"Its another example on how things have changed, remember when you were first ten? (A/N I say that because a few times she changes her self to a ten year old or younger...) You used to run around with the dumb chickens. But when you turned twelve your dam said you had to act like a lady?"
'How is this even reverent to now?' I asked looking at her.
"Everything. It's only been four hundred and some odd years since you were last here and already you house is under trees, the plants you grew are completely taken over my weeds. It doesn't take long for things to change. Well compared to our age it’s not long."
'So change happens all the time, I knew that why else would I have to change my age when I become old or when I have to move.'
"Sure you did," I knew Keini rolled her eyes at that because I could just see it by the tone you used.
'I did really.' I thought as I yawned.
"Come on you time to go to sleep. We will head back to you little town with whams his name in the morning." Keini said as she curled her tail around her body as well as on top of my own to keep me warm.
'Your not even old enough to be my mother Keini' That was my last thought as I drifted off to sleep, the rhythm of Keini's and mine peaceful and calm.
"Quick we must get the gate closed!" A shaman with his orange robe blowing in the wind said as his hands glowed a menacing black-color. (A/N come on guess who’s ancestor this is? bet you cant get it...)
"Are you wanting Tids Magi for that chief Svart?" A white robed shaman with purple eyes asked coming to his side. (You can’t even get this one...)
"Who else would I want Sinne? He’s the only one with Time magic here." The chief yelled drops of sweat coming off his forehead to land on the ground. Sinne moved away from the chief and walked off toward a meditating young boy looking to be about eighteen in a dark, almost black purple robe.
"Tids Magi, get your lazy butt off the ground, the chief wants you to seal the door." Sinne said kicking the boy in the foot to get his attention.
The young shaman stood up and walked toward the door not even saying a word to those who passed by. His white eyes taking in the sights around him. He walked beside the chief and brought is hands up in a preying motion. "You wanted me Chief Svart?" the boy questioned his voice more feminist then what would be considered normal.
"We need the seal placed on the door you moron. You’re the only one who can do it." The chief answered patting the lad on the back. "Don’t let us down or well roast your rump over the next one thousand fires that we see."
'I won’t, trust me' the boy thought as he faced the gate hands extended to the sky. 'Please Great Mother, let this work...'
I awoke with a start and opened my eyes to Keini's face right in front of my own.
"Put your hood up, it's morning." Keini advised looking at me like I rushed her beauty sleep, which in my opinion she needed at the moment because she was so angry this morning.
'What’s up with you having your big snout in my vision this morning?' I asked as I brought my hood over my eyes.
"First of all the suns quite high and I didn’t want you to scream your bloody head off because it would hurt when you seen it. And second theirs a weird magic in the air, it almost flees like a lot of animals and what seems to be a fellow dragon all squished together." Keini answered as she looked around the forest nervously.
'How’s that possible? The only one that I knew that was like that was Vill the green robe shaman.' I said as I stood up and looked at the forest though Keini's eyes.
"Well it defiantly can’t be him, he’s dead." Keini said starring at one spot.
"KIT! Where are you going?" A woman’s voice yelled from in the direction that Keini and me were looking.
'Quick Keini, you need to hide, who ever is there probably doesn’t like dragons like Alan.' I said quickly changing back to my eyes and looking at Keini.
"No, I'll stay out, what if she comes and attacks you for no reason?" Keini replied her ice blue eyes holding my own.
"Kit get back here!"
'Keini! Please I don’t want to scare another person.' I pleaded.
"Fine!" Keini said bowing her head toward my stomach. "If you get hurt its your fault, and your eyes will give them fright enough" She touched her head to my stomach and I gasped as she went back to a tattoo, her tail once again a white band around my neck. She got her wings back just as a curly browned hair woman with grey-blue eyes ran into the clearing, leaded by a small purple dragon.
"Oh" she said taking notice of me. "What do we have here?"
ok I was haiving fun with the names when I did them... heres the transation, and who their counter parts so to say are: Vill -Wild Svart -Black, Numair Sinne -Anger, because we all know the temper that Alanna has And finally last but not least There are more dont worry Tids Magi...Drum roll please... Time Magic... Yes I know I'm not that creative. but it pays to have a language translator... in case you people are wondering its norweagen (Sp??) anywho I'll get the next chap up on errr... lets say wednesday hehe ;D
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Tids-Magi
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Post by Tids-Magi on Nov 24, 2005 10:26:48 GMT -5
Disclaimer: Only the characters Kay, Keini and the names Svart, Vill, and Sinne belongs to me the rest of it belongs to Tamora Pierce
Ok time to give you people just a little bit of background here... Kay and Keini uses each others body parts when the other can’t use their own. Examples... When its day and Kay cant see then she uses Keini's eyes if she is out in full form. Another one is when Keini needs to know what’s going on when she’s a tattoo so she uses all of Kay's senses. Got it? Good.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 5 mistaken... a lot
"Vill?" Both Keini and me thought, as she smelled the air though my nose.
"Oh, I'm sorry you must be mistaken, I'm Daine Sarrasri." The young woman said as she came to a stop a few feet in front of me. Her tiny dragon kept coming toward me and stopped right at my feet. She stood to just about my waits on her hind legs, as she studied me for a moment then let out a series of high pitched whistles.
"Well I have never been so insulted in my life!" Keini yelled in my head. Apparently the tiny dragon said something rude to us.
Both Keini and me thought, as she smelled the air though my nose. "Oh, I'm sorry you must be mistaken, I'm Daine Sarrasri." The young woman said as she came to a stop a few feet in front of me. Her tiny dragon kept coming toward me and stopped right at my feet. She stood to just about my waits on her hind legs, as she studied me for a moment then let out a series of high pitched whistles. Keini yelled in my head. Apparently the tiny dragon said something rude to us. "You can understand her?" Daine asked cocking her head on one side like what dogs do when you call their names over and over again. "Yes" Keini thought while I shook my head no.
"Well which is it?" Daine asked placing her hands on her hips.
Once again Keini and me replied as we did before. The tiny dragon still stood there peering at my neck. She gave once single whistle, not as high as the others were, but sounding just as rude. "I am not, you sorry excuse for a dragon!" Keini said as I felt her eyes toward the dragon. "That’s it, this little dragon is gonna get its tail wiped!" Keini said as I felt her eyes toward the dragon.
"Don’t you dare harm Kit!" Daine yelled grabbing Kit and putting her in her arms.
"Her names Skysong, not Kit" Keini replied.
"How-"
"Daine! Where are you?" A male's voice said interrupting Daine.
"Over here!" She yelled back as she still looked at me, Kit squirming in her arms. Not even ten seconds after she replied a dark hared man who looked to be about forty-one and in a black robe came through the trees.
"Chief Svart?"
"Who’s chief Svart?" Daine questioned, once again looking at me oddly.
"Daine why are you asking that question? No one spoke."
"She did." Daine replied tilting her head toward me, as she looked Chief Svart's look alike.
The stranger sighed as he rubbed his shaven face. "How many times are you going to confuse Humans with animals Magelet? Are you sure you’re not just hearing an animal close by?"
"Your hearing voices... oho ah." Keini thought as I tried to hide my laughter. She used to like to play around with Vill's mind, now I guess its Daine's turn to see what its like.
"I am not hearing voices!" Daine screamed as Kit glared toward me.
I took a sharp breath in when the stranger looked at me. If looks could kill I would be dead...
"She hasn't voiced a word."
"You hear voices everywhere, but they know your dead." (this soooo does not make sence... just think about saying it to the whole I see dead people thing.... lol)
Daine glared at me as I tried to look innocent. "Numair, I swear on horse lords that she has been speaking."
I stood there my mouth open wide. That’s Numair? Wow, I didn’t think he would be that girlie. I mean come on his hair was tied back in a horse tail and by the looks of things he worried about his looks just about as much, if not more then Keini likes to picture herself roasting people. Which I might add is vary often.
"Ewe he’s so girlie." Keini thought.
"See did you hear that?" Daine asked.
"Hear what?" Was the reply that Numair gave.
"She called you girly."
'Keini quiet, your going to get me into trouble.'
"Now see here," Numair said advancing toward me. "I don’t care if your Thayet or even Jon, but nobody calls me girlie!"
I felt Keini growl as Numair came closer and before I could stop her she came out behind me and put her tail between us. "Touch her and you burn Shaman."
I shook me head annoyed that Keini was able to get out as I watched the color fade from Daine's and Numair's faces. Kit on the other hand let out a series whistles which sounded like an apology. Daine and Numair said nothing as they both gulped in unison.
I turned around and faced Keini glaring at her. I didn’t even have to tell her anything for her to get the message.
"What you glaring at me for? The girly man there was gonna attack you."
"That was you speaking?" Daine asked getting her courage back.
"No, it was Skysong there." Keini said rolling her eyes.
"Where did you come from?" Numair asked as he stepped back beside Daine.
"Should I tell them?" Keini asked looking at me in the eyes. 'They wouldn't understand. Remember when I went to the Yamani Islands the first time?' I thought looking back at her. The King there found out and kept having me speed up people’s lives when he was tutoring them.
"Nope sorry cant, she don’t want you to know." Keini said looking back toward the others.
"Well can we at least know your names?" Daine asked looking little disappointed.
"Well, mine is Keini" She replied
"And what’s yours miss?" Numair asked looking at me. I spelt it out for him but he didn’t understand and neither did Daine.
"Which one do you want me to tell them?" Keini asked as she laid down on the ground her head right beside my feet. 'Kay, that’s what I'm called here now.' Keini told them what my name was and that was it. I lay down in the circle that Keini made; she drew her wing over her body so I could take off my hood without the danger of the sun harming my eyes.
"What’s up with your eyes Kay?" Numair asked looking at me through the opening as Daine came and stood there beside him letting Kit down on the ground.
"They have no color" Keini replied watching them from the corner of her eye.
'Jeez I feel like a zoo animal,' I thought as I curled up into a ball.
"You’re not a zoo animal" Keini replied.
"Who’s not a zoo animal, and what’s a zoo?" Yep Numair is just like Chief Svart, always asking questions.
"Kay there thinks she a zoo animal because you are looking at her the way people look at them. And for what’s a Zoo, you'll find out when the time comes, if you’re still alive that is." Keini replied tilting her wing to where Numair and Daine couldn't see me through the front.
"Wait... so you have seen the future?" Numair asked as I used Keini's eyes to watch what they did. Numair sat a respectful amount of distance away from Keini's head, and Daine still stood at the entrance her head tilted to one side. Kit, I have no clue where she got to...
"Maybe, and maybe not."
I sighed and went back to look through my eyes, only to see Kit standing there with one of her paws glowing brightly. I let screamed from the pain it caused my eyes and hid my head on Keini's belly sobbing a little. Keini moved her wing so everyone could look to see what happened. I could feel Keini ready to burn Kit into the next century, but Daine came and stood in-between them and lifted Kit up.
"You little piece of dragon dung!" Keini yelled glaring at Kit, "If you seriously harmed her in anyway, so help me Mithros, you will burn."
"Kay what happened?" Numair asked putting his hand on my shoulder.
"Your bloody dragon there had a bright light shining in her eyes, that’s what." Keini said glaring at Numair.
"Hey don’t be giving me trouble, if you want us to help her I suggest you get her to turn around and face me." Numair replied, as I could hear Daine giving Kit trouble no to far away.
"Fine then!" Keini said as she grabbed me with her tail and turned me around to face Numair my eyes still closed. I could feel him putting his fingers close to the side of my face, but not touching it.
"Why wont she fall asleep?" Numair asked removing his fingers from the side of my face.
"That’s what you wanted to do was just put her to sleep?" Keini asked loosing her grip on me.
"Of course. We need to get her to Corus so a healer there can look at her."
"Well she won’t fall asleep by your magic, let me get her to sleep." Keini said laying me back on her side."I don’t want to fall asleep Keini," I thought.
[i'"I'm perfectly fine,'[/i]I thought.
"Your such a liar." Keini replied putting her tail on me, this method always worked and not even a few seconds later I was out like a light.
Whoot Whoot!!!!! points for me anywho hope you peoples like my story and hopefully people who are reading this with review
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Post by alanna on Dec 4, 2005 19:41:44 GMT -5
i like it a lot please please please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LUV AL
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Post by alanna on Dec 7, 2005 16:13:51 GMT -5
Your story flow is very good. Eveery thing up to now makes perfect sence and there is also the mystery of what/who she is. i like it LUV AL
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Tids-Magi
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Post by Tids-Magi on Dec 7, 2005 16:16:31 GMT -5
oh my goat.... I close the window and open it again and theirs a review... hehe... lol anywho I will put the next chap up in about... errr lets say five mins cuz I have to change some things on it... hehe
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Post by alanna on Dec 7, 2005 16:24:22 GMT -5
Ok i'll be waiting Luv al
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