Post by goofygirl on Jul 26, 2007 13:12:04 GMT -5
Rating: T(I think)
Summary: A newly wed couple having a baby
Okay guys, I just wrote the intro, so please tell me what you think of it so far, and I'll keep writing
The lights are turned on, and there sits an empty living room with only a love seat, a small coffee table and a tiny T.V. In walk the two main characters, Adam and Nancy. They enter through the door, Adam is carrying Nancy.
Nancy: Okay, you can put me down now!!
Adam: But I’m trying to follow tradition. You know, carrying the bride across the threshold.
Adam reaches the love seat and drops Nancy. He plops himself next to her
Nancy: Since when have you ever followed tradition? We had s*x, and moved in with each other before you even proposed. I think tradition can be thrown out the window.
Adam: Okay, so maybe not tradition, but would you believe gentlemanly?
Nancy: You have never been the top-hat wearing, cane-holding, bowing sort of guy, so why start now? Why don’t you just admit that you wanted to get me into you arms and act like jack-*ss you are, and whom I fell in love with?
Adam: I didn’t think that jack-*ss was an endearment, I always thought of it as an insult.
Nancy: It only becomes an endearment when it is said by someone who truly loves you, and knows you inside and out.
Adam: Oh please. Don’t get all lovey-dovey on me. That’s not you.
Nancy: Yeah, I know. So, what do you want to do on our first day of being husband and wife?
Adam: I don’t know. (Adam picks up the remote for the TV. that was lying on the table) I think there might be a hockey game on or something.
Summary: A newly wed couple having a baby
Okay guys, I just wrote the intro, so please tell me what you think of it so far, and I'll keep writing
The lights are turned on, and there sits an empty living room with only a love seat, a small coffee table and a tiny T.V. In walk the two main characters, Adam and Nancy. They enter through the door, Adam is carrying Nancy.
Nancy: Okay, you can put me down now!!
Adam: But I’m trying to follow tradition. You know, carrying the bride across the threshold.
Adam reaches the love seat and drops Nancy. He plops himself next to her
Nancy: Since when have you ever followed tradition? We had s*x, and moved in with each other before you even proposed. I think tradition can be thrown out the window.
Adam: Okay, so maybe not tradition, but would you believe gentlemanly?
Nancy: You have never been the top-hat wearing, cane-holding, bowing sort of guy, so why start now? Why don’t you just admit that you wanted to get me into you arms and act like jack-*ss you are, and whom I fell in love with?
Adam: I didn’t think that jack-*ss was an endearment, I always thought of it as an insult.
Nancy: It only becomes an endearment when it is said by someone who truly loves you, and knows you inside and out.
Adam: Oh please. Don’t get all lovey-dovey on me. That’s not you.
Nancy: Yeah, I know. So, what do you want to do on our first day of being husband and wife?
Adam: I don’t know. (Adam picks up the remote for the TV. that was lying on the table) I think there might be a hockey game on or something.