Post by Anime Monster on Sept 27, 2005 16:45:38 GMT -5
If anyone wants to continue this, they are welcomed, however I do have an exposition for the story.
Disclaimer: I do not own CSI, it's the best show on CBS and I wish I could take a little credit for it, however I rather watch it.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: very descriptive visual writing ahead.
Summary: A beginning for an episode I would like to see, but nothing more as of now.
Blood oozed from the once white walls like crimson water rolling and beading its trek to the pools below. Pools of blood expanded into one large pool, continuing to expand outwards, eating everything in its path like The Blob. Pristine, white carpet became a bright crimson red as it crept like a thief towards the exit, stealing small objects into its jaws.
A beam of bright white light, similar to the beam from a flash light fell on the crimson fluid turing it into a shiny ruby red. Across the ruby river, across the floor, up the wall, the light swept until it landed on a single air vent near the ceiling.
Flies buzzed around the air vent as blood oozed from the bottom slots of the grill covering it.
A long flat-head screwdriver with a blackhandle held in a man's latex-gloved hand slowly unscrewed the screws holding the grill in place, carefully lifting the grill up and away from the wall and air duct it was covering.
Inside the air duct laid a human corpse. She had been a tall woman with narrow shoulders dressed in a red business suit with a skirt and ruby red shoes that reminded the man who found her of The Wizard of Oz. Her head rolled away from the body, upon the lifting out of the grill and rolled out of the air duct and towards the ground.
It landed with a sickening SPLAT![/b] in the pool of blood below, splattering the blood upwards. Her once curly blond hair was matted and brown with dried blood and dirt, while the skin of her neck flapped in places where it no longer connected to her shoulders.
Behind the man a woman groaned in disgust while the man said, "I guess she just couldn't keep her head."
Disclaimer: I do not own CSI, it's the best show on CBS and I wish I could take a little credit for it, however I rather watch it.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: very descriptive visual writing ahead.
Summary: A beginning for an episode I would like to see, but nothing more as of now.
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Blood oozed from the once white walls like crimson water rolling and beading its trek to the pools below. Pools of blood expanded into one large pool, continuing to expand outwards, eating everything in its path like The Blob. Pristine, white carpet became a bright crimson red as it crept like a thief towards the exit, stealing small objects into its jaws.
A beam of bright white light, similar to the beam from a flash light fell on the crimson fluid turing it into a shiny ruby red. Across the ruby river, across the floor, up the wall, the light swept until it landed on a single air vent near the ceiling.
Flies buzzed around the air vent as blood oozed from the bottom slots of the grill covering it.
A long flat-head screwdriver with a blackhandle held in a man's latex-gloved hand slowly unscrewed the screws holding the grill in place, carefully lifting the grill up and away from the wall and air duct it was covering.
Inside the air duct laid a human corpse. She had been a tall woman with narrow shoulders dressed in a red business suit with a skirt and ruby red shoes that reminded the man who found her of The Wizard of Oz. Her head rolled away from the body, upon the lifting out of the grill and rolled out of the air duct and towards the ground.
It landed with a sickening SPLAT![/b] in the pool of blood below, splattering the blood upwards. Her once curly blond hair was matted and brown with dried blood and dirt, while the skin of her neck flapped in places where it no longer connected to her shoulders.
Behind the man a woman groaned in disgust while the man said, "I guess she just couldn't keep her head."
