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Abyss
Oct 29, 2005 7:30:13 GMT -5
Post by Lady Mage on Oct 29, 2005 7:30:13 GMT -5
What one about the fish?
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Abyss
Nov 16, 2005 9:27:23 GMT -5
Post by WindbentRose on Nov 16, 2005 9:27:23 GMT -5
O, I wrote a haiku about a fish several years ago that Sarra really likes. It's on my other computer though, and I forget the exact wording... otherwise it would be up by now.
:-) Rosalyn
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Mar 7, 2007 14:45:42 GMT -5
Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 7, 2007 14:45:42 GMT -5
This was fantastic! I have read many poems about rain, from the subjects of life to death, but this was very unique. Excellent job!
Favorite line:
And with the rain came new life, except where she needed it in her desert of a heart (That was a great metaphor!)
Please do write more. I enjoyed this very much.
~Song <3
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