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Post by Ravendust on Feb 28, 2007 22:19:56 GMT -5
Heh, thanks... ^_^ Bob makes Raven happy with her comments...
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Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 7, 2007 15:44:39 GMT -5
You did very nicely, Raven. I don't necessarily think it was angsty; certainly sad. Very sweetly written, and very enjoyable.
Favorite line:
Where hath thy love fled? Am I disowned unto thee, For how I live my life, Am I such a disappointment, That thou can’t see past my outer shell
Excellent job.
~Song <3
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Post by Ravendust on Jul 22, 2007 18:04:59 GMT -5
Thank you so much^^ Sorry it took so long to reply, I've been so distracted lately that things seem to escape my notice quite often... ><
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