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Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 9, 2007 20:34:12 GMT -5
Her name left a bittersweet taste on your tongue She was almost grown, yet far too young
She was uninformed as to how we payed The drunken nights and the blurry days
She didn’t understand what she never could see And her dreams kept her blind; a victim-to-be
She wanted the crown; she wanted the lights She wanted the cheers; the unslept nights
She wished for the fame, to be exactly like me…
And to her demise What she asked for, she received.
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Post by Lady Mage on Mar 14, 2007 13:17:57 GMT -5
O gosh, it's gorgeous and sad. You should have a period at the end. Good job!
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Post by Dreamer on Mar 14, 2007 23:45:12 GMT -5
Love that one, Song!! Beautiful job!! ~Anna Christie~
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paintedmusic
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I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't I would die. -- Isaac Asimov
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Post by paintedmusic on Jan 20, 2008 18:12:31 GMT -5
And to her demise What she asked for, she received. I loved this line; it reminded me of the whole "be careful what you wish for" or "ask and ye shall receive" - that whole idea. But in a dark way. Beautiful.
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