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Post by jason1 on Jun 24, 2006 21:49:05 GMT -5
Do you hear me? I am the man in the corner Do you see me? The one shaking and on the verge of tears Do you know me? The realization of my own brutal fears Will you help me? I need someone to put this back into perspective Do you not even care? After all this, one thing I have learned Will you just walk away? As you pass me by, your back is turned
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Look at him presumptuously standing there Taking up your space, breathing your air
Beaten and broken, in my corner I lay Apparently I failed to realize I was in your way
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Andrea
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Post by Andrea on Jul 5, 2006 14:20:42 GMT -5
Hm, I can really relate to this. Keep expressing yourself.
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Post by jason1 on Jul 17, 2006 3:34:39 GMT -5
thank you for your reply it means alot. selfishly im glad you can relate it gives me some sense of normality but i am also truly sorry if you feel that way noone should. thank you agian
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Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 7, 2007 15:03:07 GMT -5
I can very easily relate to this. (Except the man part... Teehee)
I love this poem! The pattern of the question versus the answer has always been a favorite of mine! You portrayed this struggle (whatever it may be exactly) very nicely.
Favorite line:
Do you know me? The realization of my own brutal fears
Please continue to write!
~Song <3
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