Lady Phoenix
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Post by Lady Phoenix on Jul 26, 2006 8:54:49 GMT -5
This one came up while I was updating the blog of one of my Spellbound characters, Kalista Harper. This particular character has had spells placed over her to be controlled by the "bad guy", she was beaten and severely raped. She found herself in a room with a man who clearly wanted from her what she did not want to willingly give, but she wanted to show him that SHE was the one in control so she did submit this last time... only SHE wasn't the one beaten and humiliated. She refused to be the weak one. She was going to make sure that he respected her when she left that room. And after she was done teaching him the lesson to be taught... He did.
As she told him, No man lays hands on her unless she wishes it. Not anymore...
Kalista © to me and me alone. (The poem did have some inspiration from Within Temptation's song "Dark Wings")
Dark Wings Taking Me
Dark wings are taking flight Taking me higher above my people. I look down upon them And feel nothing.
I am cold, and dispassionate. Care nothing for no one. I am not sure when this happened, But the fire has taken me.
Try to attack me if you will, I will match you move for move. The power is mine, I drink it in.
The strength is more than I knew. Tears are frozen inside. I'll not be roughed up again. I remain the one in control.
I once called you Master, But no more. When you wake I will control you.
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Post by Anime Monster on Jul 26, 2006 17:34:37 GMT -5
That's a pretty good poem. You have a talent for writing.
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Lady Phoenix
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Post by Lady Phoenix on Jul 30, 2006 9:39:22 GMT -5
Thank you very much ^_^
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Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 7, 2007 15:31:55 GMT -5
I enjoyed this. Strangely, I found myself singing the words. I feel it would make an excellent song! Have you ever considered revising it slightly to fit the music format?
Favorite line:
I once called you Master, But no more. When you wake I will control you.
Great job!
~Song <3
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