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Post by poeticsoul on Mar 19, 2007 20:38:44 GMT -5
This is my first poem here. I would rate it... K+ to T... I hope you all like it! The decision has been made... Nothing can change that. What is there to do now? Do I sit and wait? I sit on my hands... I pull my hair... What can cure this pain? There is not a single thing that I can do...
That scares me...
I have always done something... What do you do when there is nothing left to be done? I rock in the corner... Lights dimmed... Knees pulled to chest, hugged tightly by my weakened arms... The room is spinning. Why did I make that one decision? Just that one, little moment... Mistaken as a friend... Discovered to be a fraud... I will not be mistaken again... Never again...
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Post by Lady Idril on Mar 19, 2007 23:25:23 GMT -5
Very nicely done! It's dark and emotional, I like it very much
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Post by poeticsoul on Mar 20, 2007 6:30:17 GMT -5
Thank you, very much, Idril!
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Post by Dreamer on Mar 24, 2007 1:06:28 GMT -5
Totally agree with you there, Idril!! Wonderful job, Kinz!!! Very deeply emotional!!! ~Anna Christie~
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Post by poeticsoul on Mar 24, 2007 8:13:49 GMT -5
Thanks, Anna C!
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