There's A Dragon In My Sock Drawer

[scorpiorising]

I wrote this years ago for my Brother's young children, all teenagers these days,but now I have a brand new niece- 1 year old, this past May, and wrote a poetry book for her. This is my favorite.


There's A Dragon In My Sock Drawer
That eats one out of every pair
so whenever I go to find them
There's only one of each in there

There's a fairy under my bed sheet
a mischievious one I know
so whenever I try to make my bed neat
she crumples the sheets up so

There's an elf hiding in my closet
who tangles my hangers up tight
so whenever I try to hang up my clothes
I get into a terrible fight

Then Mr. and Mrs. Moonbeam
Keep me awake at night
by shining through my bedroom window
and making my room too bright

One by one each creature teases
and gets me in trouble all day
by doing what each one pleases
to cause me some delay

I tried to explain to my Mother
about the fairy, dragon and elf
but she said it was none other
than a little girl named- myself

[rayman112]

Not bad, It kind of reminded me of one of the poem books my mum used to read to me when I was younger. You brought back some great memories.

Alright so construtive criticism umm...... I couldn't find manny grammar issues and beleive me I had to look hard. All I can say is "mischevious" is actually spelled mischievous with an "i" between the "h" and "e" and there's a space between bed sheet.
So other than two miss spelled words it was pretty much perfect from what I could tell. I only pointed this out because I felt that I should write something helpful atleast.