The Great Change

[missmin]

The Great Change

Is it wrong, not to miss the pillars of my life?
Is it weird, that I stand tall, only when others are short?
Or that I don’t feel it?
Is it wrong?

Fleeting pain
Little gain
I am at a stand still before
The great change
And I wonder

Is it wrong, not to fear it?
Is it weird that I do not anticipate it?
Or that I don’t feel it?
Is it wrong?

I know who I am
But others do not
I must decide on
The outside
And I wonder

Is it wrong that I can live without you?
It is weird, that I never went looking about you?
Or that I don’t feel it?
It is wrong?

I am standing on the edge
Waiting for the wind to blow me
Over and beyond
This great change
And I wonder

Am I doing this right?

[StoriesThatNeverWere]

I thought this was a delightful insight into the uncertainties of life. I know I have asked myself these very questions before. You did a lovely job compiling such delicate thoughts together, and I am left with an optimistic hope for the subject. The last stanza was my favorite.

[Lady Idril]

I agree with Song, completely (:

There's a charm and a confidence to it that's very appealing. And it flows so wonderfully! Everything feels perfectly right about it. I love it, very nice job!

[missmin]

Thank you! I appreciate it.
I was hoping other people would be able to connect, so I'm glad to hear you say that.