Let Forth The Dawn

[StoriesThatNeverWere]

Let Forth The Dawn

Suicidal sunsets,
They always lie.
A show of false humor;
Mouths turn dry.

Try, try again.
Skin sweats amber.
Corral the tide
And mock surrender.

Embellish destitute.
Whip the flock blind.
They cry too
With fingers entwined.

Over-sated medicine,
We take ours now.
Stabbing our throats,
We swallow our vows.

In the fossil of peace
You do not speak.
Distill our memory!
We are asinine freaks.

Like the little orphan
Who plays with her doll,
You love us briefly
Then not at all.

Hapless in your wake,
Tender when you sleep.
Sew our open scars,
Or leave our lives reaped.

But what is a King
Who’s slaughtered each pawn?
Straighten your crown!
Let forth the dawn.

[Lady Idril]

Fantastic, dear! This is very intense and strong and passionate.. I love it. (:

[Dreamer]

W-ow, Song! This is well... I hate to repeat other people but it's just what Idril said! It's intense, strong and passionate! And beautiful. Secretly though... what's it about? Haha, I have my own interpretation but I somehow doubt it's what you had in mind. Still, very beautiful piece.