Love plague

[Lex]

Hmm, a mix of sadness and love, once again deciated to my ex.

Love plague

You split me in two,
Two parts, waging a civil war,
A prayer, a curse,
Dancing in the chaos of thought.

I should hate you, cut you,
Bleed you of your pitiful life.
Why let you live on?
All you do is torment me…

I should love you, want you,
Try to listen to your tears fall.
Why sever such love?
You never did anything wrong…

I started this; I brought your hell into my life,
And loved it, loved every second spent with you.

You ended this: causing a greater evil to enter,
And still I endure it, and every minute I get better.

My choice, your choice.

I fight, I die.

Such love, such chaos.
A teenage romance ne’er to be.
A dance of the love we share.

I stop,
Battleground dreams alight,
Nightmares pause and shy away.

How do you feel?

[Lady Idril]

Wow, another stunning piece. You're chock-full of brilliance, don't you dare deny it.

There's a strong urgency to this - like a bit of agressive frustration and sadness rolled into one. It works very well, I like it a lot

[Lex]

Thanks Idril. It follows the ussual ppattern for me writing poetry; five minutes hack 'n' slash.

Apparently that works well, but I don't think this is that good.

[Lady Mage]

latu: very good poem- good emotions. It's great. As you know, i'm jealous of your hack and slash methods . I wonder if Bi knew how much she meant to you, whether she would have broken up with you or not. But that's in the past, and I won't make it harder by reminding you of her. Again, nice job on the poem.

Lady Mage

[Lex]

Thanks Milady.