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Post by theblackrose on Jan 11, 2006 11:47:57 GMT -5
A/N: Just a thing I came up with one night
A world of laughter and joy filled my heart, Each day I wondered what the day had in store for me, Until that dark stormy day when fate ruined it all, Death and destruction tore its way through my town, Leaving me with nothing.
Great hurricane- You took my home, You took my family, You took my friends, You took my only love away from me, I salute you with a gun to my head, For I can live my life no more.
I was about to fire when a light shone amongst the darkness, A figure emerged from the wreckage of a house, My one true love, “You’re alive!” I cried as she smiled at me, I ran towards her as fast as I could, But then she vanished.
I woke up.
Only a dream, She’s really gone.
Great hurricane- You took my home, You took my family, You took my friends, You took my only love away from me, I salute you with a gun to my head…
… and I fire.
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Post by Lady Mage on Jan 11, 2006 12:02:12 GMT -5
WHOOTT! YEAH BLACKY! THAT WAS REALLY GOOD!
MAGE
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Post by theblackrose on Jan 11, 2006 14:58:52 GMT -5
ty very much ^_^
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Post by Lady Mage on Mar 26, 2006 19:14:42 GMT -5
no problem at all. Write more soon!
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Post by StoriesThatNeverWere on Mar 3, 2007 15:38:19 GMT -5
WOW! That was fantastic! Beautifully written, though I hope that didn't actually happen! Favorite line: I salute you with a gun to my head Great job! <3 ~Song
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