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Post by heartfeltcalamity on Oct 27, 2005 20:56:28 GMT -5
Comments and critique are always welcome. =]"Be My Rain"
Soft shades of gray Decorate the sky As I try to escape The eyes that pry The eyes that know How I feel Why my heart aches
A smile and a simple hello Are all you need to sweep me off my feet To make the butterflies in my stomach flutter To make my knees grow suddenly weak As I stutter Trying to find my voice To say hello back
Drizzling harder The rain fell Like teardrops from the heavens How I longed to say I love you To be held within your arms But if only, if only It were a reality and not some Hopeless dream
So as the rain fell today Oh, how much it reminded me of you Leaving ever so quickly Just as I was beginning to cherish its presence Like how you leave before I can express my feelings
And as your retreating form becomes more distant I take the time to softly say to myself Don't be my Valentine Don't be my heart Because valentines are overrated And this heart of mine is so easily broken No, instead Be my rain Because I'll know you'll always be back
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Andrea
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I really sort of love you
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Post by Andrea on Jun 8, 2006 15:16:31 GMT -5
Lovely, simply lovely. It's like something they read at the beginings of movies. I do truly love this.
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