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Post by LadyRiona on Jun 23, 2006 0:26:25 GMT -5
Okay, this is one of those "write a poem about a word but don't use that word in it" things. It wasn't a challenge. I was just RPing and felt really poetic, so it all just....came out. I'm describing the word "Love" and this is what I think about when I heard the word, and what it means to me.
A drawing force A small word A simple thought An overwhelming feeling It's all you know It's all you feel
Untangible, Unbelievable Simply believable
A terifying emotion A wonderful emotion Undecided Undecipherable
Unbearable Always craved Even when young It's all you have
A mother's touch A sweetheart's kiss A friendly hug An enemy's apology
Overcoming Beating all obstacles Nothing can stand it its way
Frightening at first But beautiful later Something everyone wants And something everyone has They just don't realize it
Swelling feeling Healing wounds Stops time Even for a moment Beauty uncompared
Hides faults Unconditional Without reason Unpredictable
Yes, no Maybe so Not quite sure If you want it or not You've always had it Just never realized it It comes from a source You'd never imagine
Acceptance It's all it is Then why can't we just accept That it's not derseved But given anyway?
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Post by danteslover on Jul 1, 2006 0:39:50 GMT -5
True to every aspect of the word, I applaud you!
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Post by Anime Monster on Jul 10, 2006 1:20:35 GMT -5
I wrote one of these for the word "Life." Your's is 10 times better. There is, however, a grammar error in line 24. "Nothing can stand it its way" is what you have, I think you mean, "Nothing can stand in its way." It's rare for me to find your mistakes
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