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Post by Lady Idril on Feb 24, 2007 16:03:48 GMT -5
A/N: I don't really know what this is, I literally just typed it up in the moment of feeling cold, dark, sad and yet happy at the same time. Anyway, this didn't feel like a war poem, if you look at it metophorically it can mean all things under the sun. So take it as you want, there's no right or wrong with it... Our Broken WorldOur broken world is a beautiful sight For eyes bedimmed by sleepless nights, When the clouds rolled back To reveal the earth below We saw that the war was over. Our broken world is all that now remains. Cold and bitter, no lights to be seen, Our broken world shines serene. When the tears came down To caress our cheeks We embraced. The world may be broken, But together we still stand. Peaceful reverie, Time stands still. We smiled at our world; Our beautiful, broken world.
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Post by Lex on Mar 7, 2007 11:44:32 GMT -5
Bedimmed...is that a real word!?! It should be!
Good stuff.
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Post by Lady Idril on Mar 7, 2007 12:21:59 GMT -5
Thank you very much, kind sir, glad you like it!
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