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Post by Lady Idril on Feb 15, 2007 14:46:07 GMT -5
A/N: Well, Idril is no poet, this we know. But I wanted to come up with something, and this is what I got. This poem reflects three souls: the loved, the lover and the city. Very simple, very bland, very much a disgrace to poetry. Sounds like a party, here we go...Concrete MagicBroadway knows your name at night, Like magic of the concrete kind. The moment the sun goes down I can feel your soul in the darkness. You’re here with me, inside my mind. Like magic of the concrete kind. You opened my eyes to beauty I had not the strength to find. You opened my eyes to magic, Magic of the concrete kind. And in this moment, I miss you. You feel so far away. I’m trapped by memories from long ago. Like ties without relent, the bind. But hope remains, someday you will return With your magic of the concrete kind.
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Post by Meluivan Indil on Feb 15, 2007 16:52:28 GMT -5
Wow, Idril, I love it and for some reason it reminds me of something. I think you know what.
M.
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Post by Lady Idril on Feb 15, 2007 17:00:32 GMT -5
*face/desk* Daggomit, woman, you weren't supposed to notice that. Anyway, glad you like it!
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Post by Anime Monster on Feb 19, 2007 16:35:23 GMT -5
Very nice, beautiful. It kinda makes me want to cry.
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Post by Lady Idril on Feb 19, 2007 17:17:48 GMT -5
Aww! Definitely not my intent. *hugs* But I'm glad you like it, thank you
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Post by Lady Mage on Feb 22, 2007 14:37:38 GMT -5
Idril, you blow my mind away sometimes with your creativity. Very nice job!
Lady Mage
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Post by Lady Idril on Feb 22, 2007 20:29:02 GMT -5
Mage, you are too sweet to me! Thank you very much!
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