Raye
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Post by Raye on Aug 18, 2007 0:23:57 GMT -5
Gah, I've already posted three stories in the fantasy forum, and there are none that I'm happy with. So, I just need a great plot. I've got characters all up in my head, and I have a nice little world going, I just need a plot and I'm good to go. Help?
Raye
PS: The topic is FANTASY...hurray?
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Post by Meluivan Indil on Aug 18, 2007 14:31:09 GMT -5
Raye, send me a description of the world and the characters and I'll see if I can think of anything for you. Give me as much information as you can think of.
M.
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Post by Raye on Aug 20, 2007 18:25:20 GMT -5
OK, Here's what I've got so far, I sent you a PM with the information too, just in case you didn't read this.
Raye
Violetmoor: The World
Violetmoor used to be home to two different races. Now, only one lives. One of the races was known as the Indul, or the Storm Spirits. The other race was known as the Whyghs or Fairies. Now, only the Whyghs live there. Violetmoor is about as big as New Zealand, except it’s moon shaped, and has deserts, lakes, rivers, forests (and much more) and some parts of the land have never been explored before. The White Mountains border the land, and no Fairy or Storm Spirit has ever had the courage to go beyond those boundaries. The largest forest is the Hunter’s Forest; it has 50 million acres of tall, red wood like, trees. The city Redulia houses the king and queen of Violetmoor.
Characters:
Name: Evendra Traystelle Age: 17 Race: Whygh (Fairy)
Evendra has dark red hair that goes past her shoulders and brown eyes. She has a muscular build and her main interest is in dance. She is very mischievous and she likes to pull pranks on her two older brothers Vince and Dynn. Evendra lost her father to a disease when she was very young, now only her mother looks after her.
Name: Elvira Winter Age: Unknown Race: Unknown
Elvira is the mysterious sorceress who lives at the edge of Violetmoor. She lives in a castle made of mirrors. She seems to be going mad, for folk who live near her castle hear her muttering about finding the gates of Hell. Elvira used to be a swan. Her intentions are neither good nor evil. Elvira has silver hair and blue eyes.
Name: Vanessa Darkstar Age: 32 Race: Whygh
Vanessa is daughter to Cired Darkstar, the richest Whygh in Violetmoor besides the king and queens themselves. They are not very friendly; some say they hope to over throw the king and queen. Vanessa has black hair past her waist. She has black eyes.
Name: Salem Eveda Age: 18 Race: Whygh
Salem was raised amongst a band of thieves. He was taught the craft of stealing and speech craft for bribery. Salem met Evendra in a merchant’s shop when they both were young. They both see each other often and are great friends. He has tousled forest green hair with one white streak through it. He has a triangular face and sharp green eyes.
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Post by Meluivan Indil on Aug 21, 2007 8:57:10 GMT -5
I replied to your pm Raye. This has definate potential.
M.
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Post by Raye on Aug 21, 2007 12:24:25 GMT -5
Ah, thanks, I'll check that right now.
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