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Post by CC009Wolf on Jun 2, 2006 4:29:57 GMT -5
Ok, this is about the beach, rather than Summer. This was originally a description of the beach we had to do in English without using the letter 'A'. That was pretty difficult, and mine just seemed to turn itself into a poem.
By the way, I am NOT poetic. Tell me to write a creative story any day...
~~~.:&:.~~~
The bulk of blue H20 could never stop moving, Forever rising, forever receding, never stopping, Forever living, forever moving.
The golden rice-like gems could never stop moving, Forever rising, forever receding, never stopping, Forever living, forever shifting.
Turquoise H20, golden gems, Forever in unity.
~~~.:&:.~~~
As you see, not poetic.
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Post by Anime Monster on Jun 2, 2006 22:35:03 GMT -5
Pretty good. I can just picture the ocean in my mind...*closes eyes* Now all I need it a swimsuit and to drive to the beach.
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Post by CC009Wolf on Jun 3, 2006 4:03:35 GMT -5
Yeah, that's how I felt, except I didn't want to go to the beach; cause I don't like it. Call me a pyro. Thanks anyway.
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Post by Lady Mage on Jun 3, 2006 11:24:24 GMT -5
I like the H20 bit!
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Post by danteslover on Jun 15, 2006 8:38:12 GMT -5
This is good. I'm not sure I would have been able to think of a way to no use the letter 'A'. ^-^ Good job!
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