Post by poeticsoul on Mar 20, 2007 13:46:29 GMT -5
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(I know it rhymes in some spots and not in others, but that is just the way I wrote it.)
I had a dream where I got in a car after leaving a camp. I didnt know who was driving the car I got into, but I knew that I knew them. Then, whoever it was drove the car over a cliff. I really felt as if i were falling. When we got to the bottom, the dream repeated itself three times three nights in a row. I am sure the person in the car was my savior, Jesus Christ.
(I know it rhymes in some spots and not in others, but that is just the way I wrote it.)
I had a dream where I got in a car after leaving a camp. I didnt know who was driving the car I got into, but I knew that I knew them. Then, whoever it was drove the car over a cliff. I really felt as if i were falling. When we got to the bottom, the dream repeated itself three times three nights in a row. I am sure the person in the car was my savior, Jesus Christ.
You took me with you last night.
I followed you, unafraid.
You took me to your car,
And I got in, like I had done before.
We began to drive away.
I thought nothing of it,
It was normal.
Then I took notice,
Our path had gone astray.
You drove us to the edge of that ravine.
I, still unafraid.
With a turn of your head, you smiled at me.
And I knew what that smile meant.
Still smiling, you turned and tapped the pedal.
Down we began to fall.
My heart and stomach switched places,
My heart skipped a few beats.
The ravine was lined with trees,
Too tall for the eye to see.
Yet they seemed to leap out of our way as we continued to plummet,
You and me.
I could finally see the river below,
As frozen as someone's lost heart.
Yet when we reached it,
You and I,
We began to slide,
Our lives did not come to and end.
Then, in a blink,
You were walking away,
And I followed You to your car.
I followed you, unafraid.
You took me to your car,
And I got in, like I had done before.
We began to drive away.
I thought nothing of it,
It was normal.
Then I took notice,
Our path had gone astray.
You drove us to the edge of that ravine.
I, still unafraid.
With a turn of your head, you smiled at me.
And I knew what that smile meant.
Still smiling, you turned and tapped the pedal.
Down we began to fall.
My heart and stomach switched places,
My heart skipped a few beats.
The ravine was lined with trees,
Too tall for the eye to see.
Yet they seemed to leap out of our way as we continued to plummet,
You and me.
I could finally see the river below,
As frozen as someone's lost heart.
Yet when we reached it,
You and I,
We began to slide,
Our lives did not come to and end.
Then, in a blink,
You were walking away,
And I followed You to your car.
Brilliantly written - and that's an amazing story about your dream! Very wow ;D
