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Black Spots Sept 16, 2006 20:01:11 GMT -5

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Post by Anime Monster on Sept 16, 2006 20:01:11 GMT -5

This is a poem about the plagues, I think it fits in with the theme.

Rating: T

Black Spots

So hot
Burning up
Body turing to ash

Death is certain
At only seven
Life has not begun

Black spots
All over
Body turning to wood

"Here for you're dead"
"I'm not yet dead"
"I'll come for you tomorrow"

Quarantined
Nothing no one can do
Wasting away

"Here for you're dead"
No answer
One more on the pile

Yes, it's not that great, but I thought I'd try my hand at medievil poetry...

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Meluivan Indil Administrator Posts: 7,263	Black Spots Sept 16, 2006 21:16:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Meluivan Indil on Sept 16, 2006 21:16:31 GMT -5 Oh what imagery Anime. Very dramatic. M.
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Anime Monster Global Moderator On Temporary Hiatus from NW. Please do not contact. "But nothing's unforgiven in the four corners of hell" Posts: 3,093	Black Spots Sept 16, 2006 23:29:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Anime Monster on Sept 16, 2006 23:29:04 GMT -5 Thank you, I'm feeling a bit morbid, so I think I might switch from my fan fic entry to the second part of Who I Am... EDIT: Or my original fiction entry...
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Lady Idril Administrator Posts: 4,732	Black Spots Sept 17, 2006 2:08:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lady Idril on Sept 17, 2006 2:08:26 GMT -5 That's stunning, Anime. Very dark, very cold, very dramatic. Very medieval Great work!
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Anime Monster Global Moderator On Temporary Hiatus from NW. Please do not contact. "But nothing's unforgiven in the four corners of hell" Posts: 3,093	Black Spots Sept 17, 2006 20:27:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Anime Monster on Sept 17, 2006 20:27:07 GMT -5 Thank you. That was my first attempt at medievil poetry, I'm glad you liked it.
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Post by Meluivan Indil on Sept 16, 2006 21:16:31 GMT -5

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Post by Anime Monster on Sept 17, 2006 20:27:07 GMT -5