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Post by Ark on Dec 27, 2006 1:47:17 GMT -5
Not to sound annoying, but this is really from the heart at the moment.
Naïve as the Tides
It’s time I’ve come to terms with it I’ve removed the veil I can feel it drift out Then come back, That feeling, Drowning me with its ebb and flow. It makes me realize my mistake I’ve got to overcome it, Stop following in the moon’s footsteps. I’ve got to break out, But, thusly remain hidden. I can not burden others with my loathing. I have, and I must repent.
That time comes, it dawns on me again. Even as the sky darkens, and I rest my head, It haunts my dreams, Destroys my mind, I don’t think I’ll be around next time.
Pity me not, Ignore my existence. I wish to be loved, But not at the expense of the tides of your time.
This is my end, I am reborn. No longer will that mirror-sphere lead me, I’ll forge my path, none will follow. Not to lead, not to search, But to be.
Emo? Yes. Terrible? Definitely. I apologize for this work. --sigh--
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Post by Ravendust on Dec 28, 2006 21:49:25 GMT -5
Wow, I really liked this Ark.
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Post by danteslover on Jan 14, 2007 22:05:30 GMT -5
You express well the feelings of one coming to terms with the truth. This is an admirable work, I think.
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Post by Dreamer on Mar 18, 2007 5:23:23 GMT -5
Very good... I have to agree with danteslover entirely! Nice write! ~Anna Christie~
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Post by Ark on Mar 18, 2007 14:30:27 GMT -5
Thankies.
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