|
Half
Sept 18, 2006 12:05:48 GMT -5
Post by Meluivan Indil on Sept 18, 2006 12:05:48 GMT -5
Yes I am pleased that you are back, but even though you answered questions with this you brought up so many more you evil person you. You have to write more soon. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
M.
|
|
me
Forum Newbie
Yeah Hikaru and Kaoru!
Posts: 48
|
Half
Sept 19, 2006 13:33:41 GMT -5
Post by me on Sept 19, 2006 13:33:41 GMT -5
I know i'm evil lol. and i will write more i promise!!
|
|
me
Forum Newbie
Yeah Hikaru and Kaoru!
Posts: 48
|
Half
Sept 25, 2006 13:40:33 GMT -5
Post by me on Sept 25, 2006 13:40:33 GMT -5
Yeah another chapter like i said i would.
Chapter 7
She removed her hand I was back once again in the harsh present with no control of his life, he had let go of it when he fled the house. He looked up in to his sisters azure eyes and saw him self in them drenched and muddy.
“Are you ok?” She frowned deeply, I just nodded dumbly. “You just spaced out there for a minute or two.” She gave me a lopsided smile and sighed. “As long as you’re sure.”
“Faith!” Skia shout over to us. “I want to be home before night fall lets leave now.” He ignored me completely in a strange masochistic way it was worse then when he was trying to kill me, at least then he was acknowledging my existence. She nodded and started to leave. She had second thoughts ran back to me, giving me her umbrella and a small kiss on the cheek. Before hurrying back to Skia, who was frowning to himself with good reason I guess. I stayed frozen in place and watched them leave. Skia was right about leaving this place before nightfall, after dark would be the time my father visited the grave; no one wanted to be there then. So I got up slowly and said my last goodbyes, I would not be back for awhile, there was no good fooling myself thinking otherwise. The rain had eased off a little, I was so wet anyway the umbrella my sister gave me was point less but I used it anyway. Strange the things we do just to be connected in a way to a person. I decided to go to a burger bar for a bit as I know that Kio wouldn’t want me back till he was and in our sweet departing of ways he had not mentioned when he would be back. The meat tasted plain and dry, I hadn’t expected much from it places like these are well know for their disgusting food. I played with it before throwing what remained of it away in sheer boredom. The sky was going a bruised shade of purple so I assumed Kio had to be back by now; I slipped out of the fast food joint as quickly as possible and headed back to the sanctuary.
*****************************************
I entered the front door it was the quietest I had ever heard it here, a sort of eerie silence which gave me goose bumps. I slowly opened the kitchen door which was normally the hive of activity, yet today only Kio was sitting at the table splayed acrossed it. For a spilt second I thought he was dead, my heart stopped and I held my breath.
“Don’t say a thing.” He gritted his teeth “Just keep walking demon whore.” I let out sigh of relief he sounded like he normally did, perhaps slightly grouchier but nothing strange in his behaviour.
“The court thing didn’t go so well then.” I got my self a glass of water and sipped it, watching his every move. He grunted and sighed in reply which I translated as ‘it went crap’. “That bad huh?” I tried to put some sympathy in my voice, but he gave no sign he heard me at all. Shrugging at his manner and tipped the rest of the water down the drain, leaving Kio to brood about his defeat. I begun to make my way to my bedroom when I saw Fres, he smiled slightly as I approached him almost alluringly but I put that thought out of my mind. Kio was in a bad mood and if I did anything with Fres he would fore fill his promise to kill me.
“Hey.” He smiled at me coyly. “I wanted to talk to you but you went out.” He paused thinking for the right words to say or maybe how to say them. “Would you like to come in to my room so we can talk?” I nodded seeing no problems in doing so. “Kio is having a bad day.” I followed him in to his room, he smiled awkwardly.
“He’s always like this hen he loses a case, the higher rank angels go hard on him as well with does not help. How was you’re day?” He asked curiously sitting on his single bed. The room was pretty bare, no posters up on the wall no signs of personal effects.
“It was an average day for me I guess.” Giving him no clues of what happened, my personal life was my own, some may view it as a cold but I do what I think is best for me. “What do you want to talk about?”
“I was thinking Star… Well.” I waited patiently for him knowing if I said anything he would probably bottle out of what he was saying. It must be important by the way he is so nervous about it. “well you probably won’t be here for very long and I was wondering if I could come with you.” He blushed slightly.
“why would you want to come with me, my life is hard you probably wouldn’t like it at all.” As soon as these words left my mouth I realised I was being extremely stupid.
“Because I love you.”
|
|
|
Half
Sept 26, 2006 9:11:55 GMT -5
Post by Meluivan Indil on Sept 26, 2006 9:11:55 GMT -5
Aw, that was so sweet. Fres seems so niave and innocent. But I don't really see Star being that into him. Poor kid.
As I've said before this story is really good and it is keeping me on my toes for sure. I can't even guess what would happen next.
Eagerly awaiting more.
M.
|
|
|
Half
Oct 30, 2006 16:17:26 GMT -5
Post by jess on Oct 30, 2006 16:17:26 GMT -5
c im writing you a reply love your story and im glad u finally wrote some more.ur stories so cute and sweet and cute and just write more.lol ;D
|
|
|
Half
Nov 2, 2006 13:14:26 GMT -5
Post by george on Nov 2, 2006 13:14:26 GMT -5
yeah i read your story too. ;D your story is really cool. please write more please it's great!!!!!
|
|