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Post by silverflame on May 17, 2006 12:24:49 GMT -5
Summer of Dusk
How long will summer last? Not even he knows. Forever in his soul, Forever in his heart. The gold of the sunset, His eyes. The golden sun, The halo of his hair. We watched the sunset, So many summer nights. The summer was with him. A season of freedom. A season of smiles. We watched the last sunset, His eyes turned away.
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Post by Meluivan Indil on May 17, 2006 19:52:54 GMT -5
Very beautiful. I like this part the best.
The gold of the sunset, His eyes. The golden sun, The halo of his hair
I never can describe thing like that. I'm envious.
M.
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Post by Anime Monster on May 17, 2006 22:41:51 GMT -5
This reminds me of The Ataris "The Boys of Summer" I love it, you're great.
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Post by silverflame on May 18, 2006 15:05:11 GMT -5
Thanks, both of you. It's actually kind of about some memories of mine. But I'm glad you like it.
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Post by Lady Idril on May 18, 2006 16:08:03 GMT -5
*gapes* Perfection, as always. I just love it.
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Post by danteslover on May 19, 2006 20:40:05 GMT -5
Typical of you to write in such a simplistic manner, and yet create before our eyes a true masterpiece, is it not, silverflame? *smile*
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Post by silverflame on May 20, 2006 16:34:50 GMT -5
Thank you, LadyIdril and DL. I have no idea what else to say. And as for it being a masterpiece, it didn't really seem like it to me while I was writing it.
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