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Post by silverflame on May 26, 2006 13:36:31 GMT -5
That's usually how it is within five minutes of me writing something. But I've gotten the idea that people usually end up liking the stuff I write so I ignore how I feel about it since it's never going to be right to me and then see what everyone else thinks.
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Post by danteslover on May 28, 2006 12:12:37 GMT -5
I wish I could make myself do that. But, I never really trusted many people, because I haven't had many friends for more than a year; I never do anything to them though. People like to lie to me. The people who don't lie to me I would do a favor almost any day (depending upon the favor). I don't like most people much...
Bring not hate, Bring not pleasure Bring not the feel of Changing waether. Let day not dawn And night not darken; Within there lie A million harpoons. All stare into mine eyes And wish to shake me loose From sad existance. There's a start.
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Post by silverflame on May 31, 2006 23:53:51 GMT -5
I'm pretty much the same way. It's hard to find people that you know you can trust, but there are some out there. I don't really blame you for being unable to trust, though.
That's a good poem or start for a poem. You should write more like that.
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Post by danteslover on Jun 15, 2006 8:36:00 GMT -5
Isn't it though? I only have one friend I really trust, like alot.
Think so? It's alright I guess, kinda pulled it out of nowhere.
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Post by silverflame on Jun 15, 2006 19:11:00 GMT -5
Yeah, it get's hard with just having one person you trust a lot, though. That's like the only problem with it.
That's pretty good for writing it without really planning it out first.
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Post by danteslover on Jun 28, 2006 21:29:38 GMT -5
I know, but there's nothing else to do, I suppose.
Think so? It's not all that great, really.
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Post by silverflame on Jun 29, 2006 21:44:25 GMT -5
You could try trusting other people too, but that's up to you.
It is good, and don't say differently. Trust me, I'm pretty picky and I actually liked what you wrote.
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