Summer of Dusk

[silverflame]

Summer of Dusk

How long will summer last?
Not even he knows.
Forever in his soul,
Forever in his heart.
The gold of the sunset,
His eyes.
The golden sun,
The halo of his hair.
We watched the sunset,
So many summer nights.
The summer was with him.
A season of freedom.
A season of smiles.
We watched the last sunset,
His eyes turned away.

[Meluivan Indil]

Very beautiful. I like this part the best.

The gold of the sunset,
His eyes.
The golden sun,
The halo of his hair

I never can describe thing like that. I'm envious.

M.

[Anime Monster]

This reminds me of The Ataris "The Boys of Summer" I love it, you're great.

[silverflame]

Thanks, both of you. It's actually kind of about some memories of mine. But I'm glad you like it.

[Lady Idril]

*gapes* Perfection, as always. I just love it.

[danteslover]

Typical of you to write in such a simplistic manner, and yet create before our eyes a true masterpiece, is it not, silverflame? *smile*

[silverflame]

Thank you, LadyIdril and DL. I have no idea what else to say. And as for it being a masterpiece, it didn't really seem like it to me while I was writing it.